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	<title>Comments on: Yeah, so polishing a book before you query might be a good thing&#8230;</title>
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	<description>By day Daisy Whitney is a producer, reporter and on-air host in the new media business. At night, she writes novels for teens and is the author of THE MOCKINGBIRDS and THE RIVALS, which are in bookstores now.</description>
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		<title>By: Daisy Whitney &#187; What NOT to do when querying a novel</title>
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		<dc:creator>Daisy Whitney &#187; What NOT to do when querying a novel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Jan 2010 14:03:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] promised yesterday, here&#8217;s what not to do when querying a [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Victoria Schwab</title>
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		<dc:creator>Victoria Schwab</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 22:07:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Too true. I CRINGE at the first version of my first book, a version that I DID pitch. But it&#039;s also hard because at the time I didn&#039;t know any better. I thought it was good. Oh hindsight. 

YES. Polish. Let it sit. LET OTHER PEOPLE READ IT. And then do research and find your way to sites like this :p</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Too true. I CRINGE at the first version of my first book, a version that I DID pitch. But it&#8217;s also hard because at the time I didn&#8217;t know any better. I thought it was good. Oh hindsight. </p>
<p>YES. Polish. Let it sit. LET OTHER PEOPLE READ IT. And then do research and find your way to sites like this :p</p>
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		<title>By: Daisy Whitney</title>
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		<dc:creator>Daisy Whitney</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 22:02:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Alexa: I thought the same thing! I imagined it just flowed out in perfect harmony! Couldn&#039;t be farther from the truth of the long, slow, but wonderful, slog through words.
Debra: I bet there was an embarrassing party somewhere too!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Alexa: I thought the same thing! I imagined it just flowed out in perfect harmony! Couldn&#8217;t be farther from the truth of the long, slow, but wonderful, slog through words.<br />
Debra: I bet there was an embarrassing party somewhere too!</p>
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		<title>By: Debra Schubert</title>
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		<dc:creator>Debra Schubert</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 21:39:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That&#039;s &quot;part&quot; not &quot;party.&quot; Typos - they never go away.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s &#8220;part&#8221; not &#8220;party.&#8221; Typos &#8211; they never go away.</p>
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		<title>By: Debra Schubert</title>
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		<dc:creator>Debra Schubert</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 21:37:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The very first time I queried was nearly 10 years ago. There&#039;s no way that ms resembled anything close to an actual book. And, you want to know the really embarrassing party? I was at a private event shortly after with Daniel Handler (aka Lemony Snicket) and I gave him that disaster of a &quot;novel.&quot; He&#039;s probably still laughing about it to this day.

When I did finally get an agent, it was from interest on a polished manuscript (mystery) and a first draft of a YA novel. My best advice to writers looking for agents? Keep writing and query widely!!!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The very first time I queried was nearly 10 years ago. There&#8217;s no way that ms resembled anything close to an actual book. And, you want to know the really embarrassing party? I was at a private event shortly after with Daniel Handler (aka Lemony Snicket) and I gave him that disaster of a &#8220;novel.&#8221; He&#8217;s probably still laughing about it to this day.</p>
<p>When I did finally get an agent, it was from interest on a polished manuscript (mystery) and a first draft of a YA novel. My best advice to writers looking for agents? Keep writing and query widely!!!!</p>
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		<title>By: Alexa</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alexa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 19:35:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Looking forward to tomorrow, prefect timing for me.

You know until I tried to write a book I really thought writers just sat down, wrote, checked their spelling and were done. I&#039;m now on version 5 and know better :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Looking forward to tomorrow, prefect timing for me.</p>
<p>You know until I tried to write a book I really thought writers just sat down, wrote, checked their spelling and were done. I&#8217;m now on version 5 and know better <img src='http://daisywhitney.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Kimberly Franklin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kimberly Franklin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 19:02:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yeah.  It&#039;s like some sort of writer hazing...or something.  I can&#039;t wait to do all the stupid stuff I&#039;m sure I&#039;ll do!  LOL.

Hope you have a good day!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yeah.  It&#8217;s like some sort of writer hazing&#8230;or something.  I can&#8217;t wait to do all the stupid stuff I&#8217;m sure I&#8217;ll do!  LOL.</p>
<p>Hope you have a good day!</p>
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		<title>By: Daisy Whitney</title>
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		<dc:creator>Daisy Whitney</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 18:05:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A blog award!! How fun! I&#039;ll go check out yours, Ali!
Karen -- As I work on my new book I find myself wondering how many versions it&#039;ll need before I can show to editor or agent!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A blog award!! How fun! I&#8217;ll go check out yours, Ali!<br />
Karen &#8212; As I work on my new book I find myself wondering how many versions it&#8217;ll need before I can show to editor or agent!</p>
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		<title>By: ali</title>
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		<dc:creator>ali</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 17:59:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Haha! You know I like to have a good laugh Daisy ;) Your program-esque versions are awesome. My DH and I do the same thing! 

Hey, I don&#039;t know if you accept blog awards here, but I gave you one. The award was for the best blogs you&#039;ve recently discovered and you&#039;re definitely on my list!

Thank you for sharing your personal experiences with publishing ~ I appreciate it!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Haha! You know I like to have a good laugh Daisy <img src='http://daisywhitney.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' />  Your program-esque versions are awesome. My DH and I do the same thing! </p>
<p>Hey, I don&#8217;t know if you accept blog awards here, but I gave you one. The award was for the best blogs you&#8217;ve recently discovered and you&#8217;re definitely on my list!</p>
<p>Thank you for sharing your personal experiences with publishing ~ I appreciate it!</p>
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		<title>By: Karen H.</title>
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		<dc:creator>Karen H.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2010 17:47:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is an excellent reminder! I&#039;m still amazed by the 1.0, 2.0...10.0 versions of my debut novel. :)  There&#039;s no short-cut to editing and revising.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is an excellent reminder! I&#8217;m still amazed by the 1.0, 2.0&#8230;10.0 versions of my debut novel. <img src='http://daisywhitney.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />   There&#8217;s no short-cut to editing and revising.</p>
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