Here’s a bit of advice for the agent-seeking writers who read my blog. Be sure to polish, spit shine, and then refine your manuscript again before you query.
Sounds obvious, right? I mean who wouldn’t do that?
Um, me.
Yes, little ole me. (This is another post where you can have a good laugh at my expense!)
When I queried my first novel, it was, to say the least, a mess. It was hardly done, barely edited and needed massive revisions. Amazingly, I still found an agent though it took about 100 days, 75 queries, 50-plus rejections and about three major overhauls during the query process itself. The final draft was good, if I do say so myself. But the version that got me my first agent was nowhere near the version I started querying.
Sometimes that happens and it’s nothing to be ashamed of. Sometimes you can be fortunate enough to get feedback from agents who reject you. I received some terrific feedback on pacing, character development and storytelling from classy agents like Michelle Andelman, Liza Dawson and Laura Langlie for my first novel. And their input was instrumental in the revisions I made that landed me my first agent.
But I don’t advise querying in such a slapdash fashion. In fact, my husband and I had a running joke at my house during that time three years ago. I would tell him when I received a new request for my manuscript and he’d ask “For version 2.0, 3.0 or 9.0?” I’m pretty sure I actually had nine different versions of the manuscript floating out there at some point.
Come back tomorrow and I’ll share more specifics on all the dumb, embarrassing and silly things I did while querying.
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Oh man! I’m just glad it worked out for you! I’m in revising mode, but I’m going to be there awhile. I’m only on version 2.0.
Oh, Daisy! How you make me laugh. Even when it hurts to laugh because my throat feels like glass! I can’t wait to read your tomorrow post, because I know I will be right along with you making silly mistakes and doing dumb things as soon as I start querying. Isn’t completely embarrassing yourself like some kind of requirement???
Nisa: See, you’re smarter than me. I queried version 1.0! I’m glad you’re on 2.0 and it’s still safely with you!
Kim – feel better! And I am pretty sure the definition of writer includes doing embarrassing things.
This is an excellent reminder! I’m still amazed by the 1.0, 2.0…10.0 versions of my debut novel.
There’s no short-cut to editing and revising.
Haha! You know I like to have a good laugh Daisy
Your program-esque versions are awesome. My DH and I do the same thing!
Hey, I don’t know if you accept blog awards here, but I gave you one. The award was for the best blogs you’ve recently discovered and you’re definitely on my list!
Thank you for sharing your personal experiences with publishing ~ I appreciate it!
A blog award!! How fun! I’ll go check out yours, Ali!
Karen — As I work on my new book I find myself wondering how many versions it’ll need before I can show to editor or agent!
Yeah. It’s like some sort of writer hazing…or something. I can’t wait to do all the stupid stuff I’m sure I’ll do! LOL.
Hope you have a good day!
Looking forward to tomorrow, prefect timing for me.
You know until I tried to write a book I really thought writers just sat down, wrote, checked their spelling and were done. I’m now on version 5 and know better
The very first time I queried was nearly 10 years ago. There’s no way that ms resembled anything close to an actual book. And, you want to know the really embarrassing party? I was at a private event shortly after with Daniel Handler (aka Lemony Snicket) and I gave him that disaster of a “novel.” He’s probably still laughing about it to this day.
When I did finally get an agent, it was from interest on a polished manuscript (mystery) and a first draft of a YA novel. My best advice to writers looking for agents? Keep writing and query widely!!!!
That’s “part” not “party.” Typos – they never go away.
Alexa: I thought the same thing! I imagined it just flowed out in perfect harmony! Couldn’t be farther from the truth of the long, slow, but wonderful, slog through words.
Debra: I bet there was an embarrassing party somewhere too!
Too true. I CRINGE at the first version of my first book, a version that I DID pitch. But it’s also hard because at the time I didn’t know any better. I thought it was good. Oh hindsight.
YES. Polish. Let it sit. LET OTHER PEOPLE READ IT. And then do research and find your way to sites like this :p
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