Do you have a little voice that talks to you when you’re writing?
I do. And my little voice always knows best. And sometimes that little voice says, “Uh, I don’t think so, girl.” Or, “You’ve got to be kidding me.”
Sometimes the voice is subtler and doesn’t even speak, but just shakes its head. (Yes the voices in my head have heads and faces too and mostly look like Clive Owen or Daniel Craig, which is why I sometimes get distracted. And that’s when I really need to listen to the voice. Or the voice’s head shake as the case may be.)
Because the subtler the voice is, the more important the message it’s trying to impart. And that message is often something simple like, “Are you sure this is working? Wouldn’t it be better if you did this or that?”
That voice was like a humming in the background when I wrote the first draft of the book that became The Mockingbirds and it was telling me something was just slightly off. It wasn’t til I finished the first draft that I knew what in fact was off. (The book was actually missing the Mockingbirds themselves, go figure!)
Now, as I am writing the sequel, I had a similar feeling all through December while noodling around in the early pages of the manuscript. I even made it as far as 13,000 words until I hit a road block. Something just wasn’t working and the voice was shaking its head again. (Daniel and Clive both were.) So before I went full-steam ahead and finished the entire draft, I stopped, stepped back and listened.
After two weeks of NOT writing and of outlining instead, I figured out what the problem was. Better yet, I figured out how to solve it.
So now the voices are saying, “Yes! Keep going! You got it!”
Thank you, Voices. And, let me just say, you look good…
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It’s interesting to hear about how distance can be a great tool on a WIP. It’s hard to be objective when you’re neck deep in it. Thanks for sharing.
I know the feeling. My voices (Ryan Reynold and Channing Tatum…at least for now) are always shaking their heads at me. I love them (oh, I mean the voices)!
Good luck, Daisy! And, I know The Mockingbirds is going to be fabulous. Can’t wait!
Love your voices, Kim!
Adele — Yes, it’s SO true. It’s hard to get distance, but it’s so vital!
Laughed so very very hard at the tweet. I’m looking forward to The Mockingbirds, but now more than ever!!! Clive Owen voice especially deserves a special listen!!
I’m wow’ed by your site and your achievements, Ms. Whitney. Thank you for the inspirations; onward and upward! Sincerely — Roger D.
You’re voices are more encouraging than mine. My voices are MEAN. Recently my main character stepped off the page and told it to shut up. That was a good day!
You know I’m right around that place now. Something about my story is just off and I’m still trying to figure it out…oh well, I guess it will come to me in time. I hope.
Daisy,
You have a great site! (jealous, jealous…) Congratulations on your upcoming book! I do have voices in my head (LOL) Cynthia Rylant, Patricia Pollacca are always there asking if my voice sounds authentic. Jerry Pinkney is always asking me if I’m writing words worthy of his illustrations…
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